Program Planner 2.0...yes the name is lame, but I think I used it earlier, so I'm just sticking with it!
The biggest thing I changed about my pitch was that I tried to talk from memory instead of read off the paper that I had previously used. Obviously, it seems a lot better this way, but the paper was just convenient so I didn't have to do much memorization.
Last time my pitch was a few seconds longer, still over a minute, and I got feedback that advised not to cut any important stuff out and that it was okay to be over a minute. So I left it a little longer than a minute.
I think you did a great job on the pitch. You spoke very clearly and seemed very confident and knowledgeable about your idea. I think that the only way to know if this would work is to try it! I am not an RA and I don't much about it so I think that it's hard for me to really gauge how much time this would save. Overall, great job!
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Emily,
ReplyDeleteGreat elevator pitch! I was able to hear and understand you clearly. You seem like you know what you are talking about and that you are confident in it. I really like your idea, it sounds efficient and implementable! I suggest wearing a blazer and having someone else film you, you will look more professional. Great job! You can check out my pitch on parking here: http://taylertibbits.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html